fallen from the

highest shelf,

i hear through the glass

your slams at me:

couldn’t i be less broken?

but watching you fall;

the pieces of my art,

(shards of it embed the heart).

tones of pause

and gut cries:

couldn’t i be less taken?~


6 responses to “[pedestal]

  1. That really took me on some journeys in just those few short lines.

    I read it three times and got three different visions.

    I continue to be amazed by your words.


  2. excellent wonders..

  3. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/06/09/the-celebrate-blogger-of-april-awards/

    u win awards in my blog,
    please claim them!
    Happy Friday!
    Happy Saturday!

  4. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/02/the-celebrate-blogger-awards-plus-prayers-4-viola/

    The Celebrate blogger of honorable mention in short stories,

    plus 4 friendship awards for you.

    Trisha voted for you.
    have fun!

  5. fabulous portrait of shattered heart.

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