[shored]

these deserted searches
for the self,
drift as is compliant
with the tide.
these reverted senses
of whats good,
recovered by a comber
of a storm & shore collide.~

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2 responses to “[shored]

  1. i have a sense that you wrote this on impulse, words flowing without plan or edit, and that's why it's so good. last line's a cracker.

  2. thank you Noah…you're right on

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